Sep. 18, 2024CopywritingRebrandTips

6 Signs It’s Time to Refresh Your Website Copy

Tell-tale clues that those digital cobwebs are ready to be swept away

As business owners who wrestle with to-do lists that are long, and workdays that always feel too short, it’s normal to let things—like the content on your website—take a backseat. Maybe you’re too deep in the trenches of daily ops to  even consider this aspect of your biz, or you’ve been waiting for that elusive break in your schedule to give it the time and TLC that it deserves. Perhaps you’ve rolled up your sleeves and given it the college try, but had little more than a blank screen to show for your efforts. Whatever the case, when the messaging on your website is stale, it means you’re leaving room on the table when it comes to sales, community building, and opportunities for genuine visitor engagement.

Your website’s copy serves up a whole delicious buffet of functions: from attracting new customers with strategic SEO, to building connections with your audience through relatable stories and valuable content. Think of your website as your digital storefront, and your copy the hard-working employees that welcome guests, guiding them where they need to go. The language we use can drive real, organic leads. At the same time, it can filter out those visitors who aren’t interested in what you have to offer (in the biz we call this ‘qualifying your audience’).

But what happens when your copy isn’t pulling its weight? Maybe the words are speaking to the wrong crowd, the message is scattered, or your copy is disconnected from your current offerings. In any case—I’m here to help you get to the bottom of it (sort of like a *less-British* Sherlock).

Let’s dive in with 6 signs that it might be time for a website copy refresh:

1: Your business has gone through change.

Just like humans, it’s natural for businesses to grow and evolve over time. With any change, it’s important to take inventory of the content on your website to make sure that it still reflects what you do while catering to the audience you want to appeal to. Common changes to keep on your radar:

  • Entering a new market: Make sure your current website copy is inclusive, culturally appropriate, and free of any local slang that may throw off new visitors.
  • Launching new products or services: Check that your copy speaks to the value of your latest products/services while placing them strategically in your content hierarchy based on how prominently you want to feature them.
  • Shifting market trends: Review copy regularly to ensure your website copy doesn’t skip a beat when it comes to meeting the latest industry developments (this helps to build credibility and consumer trust).

By refreshing your website copy alongside these changes, you can be sure your site communicates what you do and how you can help potential clients solve a problem.

2: The quality of your services doesn’t match up with the messaging you’re using to describe it.

Is your website doing your products and services justice? If you’ve been busy innovating, but your website copy still tells the same old story, you’re likely underselling yourself. This is especially true for premium category products/services. Be transparent about what makes them special and why your audience needs them (ie: focus on the results they can deliver) then back it up with social proof (customer testimonials, etc.) to give your audience the information they need to make confident buying decisions.

Tip: In the process, avoid using industry jargon or technical terms that might confuse or overwhelm your visitors. Keep the message simple and relatable to help them picture exactly how your product/service will fit into their everyday lives. Straightforward language and storytelling can make this connection clear and effortless.

3: Your conversions are down.

Usability and design are important, but if visitors leave a site quickly without interacting, it’s generally a good indicator that the content needs a touch-up. As a Vancouver lifestyle brand copywriter, I approach every project through the lens of the reader. Great website copy shouldn’t just sound good – it should guide readers through an intentional experience that builds trust and evokes emotion along the way. This helps affirm to your visitors that they’re in the right place (or can quickly do the opposite for those who aren’t a fit).

Tip: Finessing your meta descriptions can also do the trick. Meta descriptions are often the first impression your audience gets when they find you in search results. By updating them with clear, engaging, and relevant information, you can influence your SEO ranking while increasing the chances of someone clicking through to your site (and spending more time there).

4: It’s not a place you’re proud of.

Your website should be a place that you feel shout-from-the-rooftops proud to share with others. If that’s not the case, it may be because you’re waiting on that design or content refresh before splashing your URL out on business cards and other collateral for all to see.

When you’ve invested in a design that you feel proud to show off, you’ll often feel encouraged to level-up your language, too. It’s also worthwhile to note that great design doesn’t compensate for lacklustre copy (and visa-versa) — both go hand-in-hand to create a cohesive experience.

5: Your messaging is all over the place.

Consistency is key, friends! Here are some signs your website copy may be erring on the side of scattered.

You’re talking to everyone, but resonating with no one

One minute, you’re tapping into Gen Z TikTok trends, then suddenly you’re targeting busy moms, and next, flooding your site with industry jargon. This is a super common mistake that businesses make when they focus on expanding their reach, and instead it can cost them sales.

You’re giving mixed signals

Try to avoid multiple selling points that can clutter your core message. Choose your lane wisely, then stick to it, with value props your audience can get behind. Going through a brand development or rebranding exercise can be a valuable way to uncover insights like this.

Your call-to-actions are uninspired

One (seemingly) small piece of the web-copy puzzle that is, IMO, highly underrated, is your call-to-actions (CTAs). These are the buttons or prompts that guide visitors towards the actions you’d like them to take (contacting you for a quote, joining a waitlist, making a purchase, etc.). CTAs should stay consistent with the overall tone of your brand copy, keeping your audience connected to you right up until they make a decision. Don’t be afraid to branch out from the traditional “Learn More” and try out a more flavourful approach that integrates your brand personality.

Check out these examples from recent client projects for inspiration:

  • “Join the Fun” was used for a play-based childcare centre instead of “Submit Your Application”.
  • “Let’s Heal,” “Let’s Train,” and “Let’s Grow” was used for a physiotherapy centre that offers injury rehabilitation, sport performance training, and a special pediatrics program.
  • “Never miss a beat. Subscribe here” was used recently for a music lesson studio’s e-mail subscription section.

Tip: The more uplifting and supportive you can keep the language, the better. I find this to have much more impact than CTAs that overdo it with the urgency factor (it’s giving “desperate”).

6: You’re blending in with the crowd.

These days, developing click-worthy copy isn’t enough. To cultivate a loyal community and brand following, establishing an online narrative is major. So, how do you shine brighter than the rest? Tell a story to your audience with content that is relatable… and human. If there’s one surefire way to sound unoriginal, it’s by relying heavily on AI bots for your website content. Sure, there’s a time and a place for using tools like ChatGPT (such as: for generating blog content ideas, rephrasing statements, or for editing), but it’s not the thing you want crafting your core messaging. The kicker? Not only will your content sound generic (as AI pulls from pre-existing content), but it will also rank lower in the search, since Google is smart enough to pick up (and flag) AI-generated content which can harm your SEO performance.

What to do instead:

Rather than relying solely on AI for your web copy, consider working with a seasoned brand copywriter who has a knack for crafting copy that is authentic and original. Unlike AI-generated text, a professional copywriter can workshop the nuances of tone, language and storytelling to build a stronger business-to-consumer relationship.

Feeling seen? We’ve got your back! Compel Communications is a copywriting agency in Vancouver that helps both emerging and well-established brands build buzz through strategic storytelling. Get in touch to share share the full scoop on your upcoming project and to learn more about our brand copywriting services.